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I’ve given you my heart, given you my all.
But all you seem to do is fool me.
Do you want my love?
Do you want me at all, or do you hate me?

Every night I lay down and cry for you.
I cry for all the pain I put you threw.
But you don’t understand the pain that I bare,
You expected all to be fine with me.

Well you were wrong, no one is right.
Nothing’s right in this world.
My love for you has never faded away,
Yet you fool me, carelessly, as if my love for you were a game.

If you don’t want me at all, act that way.
Don’t hurt my mind with the foolish games you play.
I love you too much, the pain too great to bare,
And I don’t want to hurt you again.

You tell me that you don’t want me, that you will never be mine.
But then you turn around and lure me in again, you brought up my hopes.
As my hopes went up you crushed me, told me all my hopes were in vain.
I’ll never have more hopes ever again, don’t want to ever feel the pain.

You say that you will never be mine, not ever again.
My heart is still yours, even though you feel this way.
You can hurt me all you like, you’ve already crushed my hart in two.
My love for you will stay the same, my love will never fade away.
©2008-2009 ~darkshadowmech
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OOoooh the woes of love, the sadness that may come from it...
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A bit depressing, but I... so love it anyway ^^; ^w^

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Proud Pokemon freak, Anime geek and crazy Photographer!

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I'm original Pit in ~TheSSBBCrew!
YAY! it is depressing, it's very sad and painful. :nod:
lol, glad you like it.
:blowkiss:

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you'll never see the stars if you're always looking down
Very, yeah ^^; :nod:
Of course I do! :)

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Proud Pokemon freak, Anime geek and crazy Photographer!

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I'm original Pit in ~TheSSBBCrew!
u r welcome

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you'll never see the stars if you're always looking down
riveting words my friend, sad and depressing it may be but from the soul i suspect :? very nicely done
= )

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A day without laughter is a day wasted.~Charlie Chaplin
Yus, of course it's from the soul! lol. basically all of my depressing pieces are straight from the soul, from my thoughts and feelings, however depressing they may be! it's the HAPPY works of mine that you must question whether they are my true feelings or simply what I wish, things that will never ever happen. =/
Thanks buddy. ^_^
lol.
I think my depressing things are quite better than the happy ones, would you agree?

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